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Posao na Brodu => Život na Moru ~ Life@Sea => CV, resume, radno iskustvo & preporuke => Topic started by: elvisssssss on 23/August/2012
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Pozz svima ovo je moj prvi post na forumu koji je usput fantastican i hvala puno svima na mnogim korisnim informaciama koje sam nasao ovdje.
Posto se tek prijavljujem za posao na brodu zamolio bih sve ako mogu da prokomentarisu moju preporuku i da daju neke primjedbe ili sugestije, unaprjed hvala.
Recommendation letter
To Carnival cruise line:
I am pleased to write this letter of recommendation for Elvis Muhic. Elvis worked with me in the bar Department at Caffe bar Aurora for 2 years. He began here as Assistant Waiter, and after several promotions, ended his service as Head Waiter.
Elvis was a welcome addition to our staff from day one, and during the 24 months he has worked here he's distinguished himself as a quick learner, diligent worker and overall bright young man. He was never once late for a shift, and often stepped forward to cover the shifts of other waiters and waitresses who were in a bind..
Elvis was always willing to offer her assistance and had an excellent rapport with the many constituents served by our office including clients, employers, and other professional organizations. She would be an asset to any employer and I recommend her for any endeavor she chooses to pursue.
I would like to be very clear about why Elvis is no longer with us. Elvis is available for new challenges only because of his desire to learn and grow further. We would have loved to see him stay, but certainly understand his need to advance beyond the positions we have available.
In closing, let me say I have no hesitation in recommending Elvis Muhic for any position pertaining to . I feel confident he would be an asset to your organization.
Sincerely,
xxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx
Restaurant Manager
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Meni sve to zvuči prilično OK, osim pasusa u kome si odjednom postao she & her. no;;;
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1. I am pleased to write this letter of recommendation for Elvis Muhic.
Following are three (3) generic typical opening statements for inclusion in recommendation letters or reference letters:
I am writing this letter at the request of [name of requestor].
This is in response to your recent request for a letter of recommendation for [name].
I am pleased to be able to write this letter of recommendation for [name].
http://www.writinghelp-central.com/recommendation-power-phrases.html
2. Elvis worked with me in the bar Department at Caffe bar Aurora for 2 years.
3. He began here as Assistant Waiter, and after several promotions,
He began what?
Ovo je prevođenje rečenice "Počeo je kao .." što u našem jeziku prolazi, ali u engleskom treba objasniti šta je on to počeo? Raditi.
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To su tvoje prve tri rečenice i u svima je za*eb. Da ne idemo dalje.
Mani se ćorava posla i plati nekom profesoru ćevape da ti to nakucka. Ili plati paypalom neku od brojnih agencija koje se time bave zaozbiljno.
Ili nađi sudskog tumača za engleski i plati prijevod.
Potrošićeš oko €1.000 ili više na odlazak, pa nemoj baš na CV-u štedjeti.
A ako baš inzistiraš da bude džabe, možeš guglati rečenicu po rečenicu i vidjeti gdje griješiš. Maybe.
Meni sve to zvuči prilično OK, ...
How yes no :giggle:
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Mnogo konfuzno, slazem se sa shefom. Sve je nabacano i nema smisla.
Bolje plati nekom da ti to lepo napise i uredi. :D
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How yes no :giggle:
I was looking at the woman in the red dress. :pop:
[yt=425,350]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MXQozTxQSiE[/yt]
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Meni samo nije jasno kako "Caffe Bar Aurora" ima Restaurant managera :rofl:
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Ostavi mi mejl ukoliko hoces da ti posaljem preporuke koje su mnogo jednostavnije a preko kojih su mnogi otisli, sustina je bitna, oni i ovako to povrsno citaju.
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Evo linka za preporuku (primer):
http://www.inozemstvo-posao.com/smf_1-1-2_install/index.php?topic=4763.msg53884#msg53884