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Offline rockriro

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pozdrav iz bih :)))

Krajem ljeta punim 20, i sastavio sam svoj cv i imam još par stvari nadodat ali pošto ga prvi put pišem zanima me jeli pravilan i jeli se to traži u njemu.....

(ovo sam u wordu napisao, ali pošto mi forum preformatira tekst izgleda sve čudno napisano...pa ako može netko da mi ispravi cv ako ima grešaka u engleskom i zanima me kako prevest ugostiteljsku djelatnost, hospitality industry mi nije baš apropriejt.

i stvarno bi volio da mi savjetuje netko s foruma šta još staviti u cv i kako ga "uljepšati" da bolje prođe..hvala :))

CURRICULUM VITAE

NAME:                      H***** ********vić                                                  
PHONE:                    GSM: +387****3**9                                  
E-MAIL :                    h*****@****mail.com
NATIONALITY:        Croatian
DATE OF BIRTH:      *************2                    
HEALTH:                    Excellent- Non    Smoker                        
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        
 PASSPORT:                (***************************)

I am a experienced waiter-steward seeking to transfer my skills to the cruise ship industry.
I am looking forward to improve my English and test and improve my waiting skills.
My dream is to meet new people from abroad and make new friendships throughout the world.
                                                                  
RELEVANT  SKILLS                                                        
                                                                                          
•   Good preparation and service of beverage and food.
•   Clean  Driving  Licence
•   Management level responsibility
•   Close attention to details
•   -…
•   ..
 
EDUCATION

June-2011  Hotel and Tourism technician

EMPLOYMENT

So far, I have worked at many different positions.

From June 2007 to April 2008 I was part-time waiter in restaurant.

From June 2008 to November 2008  I worked as a bartender at the night club.

From December 2008 until June 2010 I worked as IT technician at local IT shop.

After that job I was concentrating on my High School duties.
After I graduated In June 2011, I was employed as a waiter until March 2012.

Since March 2012 I am unemployed and searching for new challenges and experiences.

My dream in life is to travel and meet many new friends and make friendships throughout the world.
I would like to see what are mine limitations, and what successes can I achieve when I’m not at home.
I am comfortable working in a team or as an individual.
I am experienced working under pressure, especially under time deadlines.
I love to work with people, make people satisfied with my service and make them feel comfortable in every way I can.  

Working on cruise ships would be an excellent chance for me to improve my English vocabulary and to live my dream of working abroad, meeting new people and seeing stuff I would never see otherwise.

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Re: Pozdraav, zanima me je li pravilan CV?
« Reply #1 on: 24/May/2012 »
Pozdrav!


i zanima me kako prevest ugostiteljsku djelatnost, hospitality industry mi nije baš apropriejt.

Za pocetak... Hospitality Industry je prilicno "aproprijet" prevod i uglavnom se taj termin i koristi koliko sam ja upoznat sa engl. jezikom.

Sto se CV-a tice, licno ti preporucujem malo sistematicniji prikaz i po mogucnosti tabelarnu formu. Manje upotrebe prvog lica takodje.


evo primer. Ovo je samo moje misljenje, naravno, izbor je na tebi.


http://www.mediafire.com/file/r55dncplrwe3bip/primer_CVa.doc





 
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Offline rockriro

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Re: Pozdraav, zanima me je li pravilan CV?
« Reply #2 on: 24/May/2012 »
hvala puno, tih par nesigurnosti i općenito neiskustvo me je bunilo. sad je sve ok, na tu shemu ću napisati ;) hvala opet

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Re: Pozdraav, zanima me je li pravilan CV?
« Reply #3 on: 24/May/2012 »
Izbaci Nationality i Health.

Ove eseje sve izbaci, a ostavi mozda samo prvu recenicu ispod "Passport".
Zamjeni "Employment" sa "Work Experience" i izbaci sve komentare. Ostavi samo podatke tipa: naziv poslodavca, naziv pozicije, period zaposlenja te duznosti/opis posla u par rijeci.

Sve ove komentare tipa zadnji paragraf ostavi za CL/Motivation Letter.

Nemoj da CV bude dulji od jedne A4 stranice.

S obzirom na tvoj CV mozda ti je najbolje da kliknes na ovaj link i tu sve odradis: http://europass.cedefop.europa.eu/en/documents/curriculum-vitae
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